Yielding Sweetly

 

I kiss your lips and sing your smile
 
while yielding softly to you
 
and your heartbeat is mine for a while
 
your love's my life's blood,marked by your style
 
My heart and soul sublimely renewed
 
O' what sweet surrender!
 
as slowly your hands know what to do
 
with caressing touch so tender
 
while yielding sweetly to you

Reviews

[Michael X]

yielding sweetly to warmth, in a cold dark world- finding escape in the arms of a lover's embrace,
the soft lips of an angel divine, your words are as romantic as the summer day is long, sensuous as a silky sheet flowing across bare skin, the rhythm is sung, harps couldn't produce a meoldy as ascending
as your lyrical flow fran marie, I could feel myself being slowly seduced by the eyes of beauty,
passionate, desirous, artful, brilliantly composed in all subtlety, a dream of love...you surrender

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O' what sweet surrender!

as slowly your hands know what to do

with caressing touch so tender

while yielding sweetly to you


hmmmm... real sweet write Fran...I like this alot... it speaks tenderly to me...like how you wrote this..

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A very nice and soft seduction... you stimulate the sense with a divine touch.

[Emily B]

mmm. . . yes, yielding sweetly, you've drawn it beautifully.

[Shadow Writer]

This was a soft and romantic write. Enjoyed. Phantom..........

[Sheila Kline]

How tantilizing is such love of sweet surrender....right down to singing your smile! Truly delightful is an admiration such as this!!

[bluessadmood]

Oh my friend these words are so hot and burning,ha ha
I felt the emotions and the surrender in every word..what could I say everything is so perfect
Yielding softly to you..Your heartbeat is mine..your love is my life
O sweet surrender..hands know what to do..caressing touch so tender
lovely in everything..