Beneath the Sun

Haiku

 

 

beneath the warm sun,
       loving you is so easy
                  feeling the sun's heat

 

 

 breathing life into
       me with your kisses divine
                  sun sets in my heart

 

 
we are one heartbeat

     sharing the same ambience

                 of soul mates in love

                    

   for it is written
             in the star's indigo sky
                     as the moon climbs high

 

balmy night breezes

  add more steam to love we share

            taking me higher

 

to a place called love

        if not written in the stars

                    our love's in my heart

 

 

   
         
        

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Oh what beauty..Breathe the sun,and feel its warmth...
Breathe the sun,how loving you is so easy,I feel your heat
Breathing life into me,Your kisses so divine,You shine into my heart
We are one heart ,we share the same ambience,Two soul mates i love
For its written high up,That you and me in the star indigo sky,as moon climbs high
Night breeze will add more steam to love we share..taking me higher,written in stars and in my heart
lovely write...

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

I love this little poem.
Full of emotion and imagery.

[Fran Marie]

thanks so much, I so apreciate it.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem for love. The artwork and words took the reader to good places to be. Beneath the sun. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Fran Marie]

thanks John, so very much;

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. Always a pleasure to read your poetry.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great Haiku String

[Shadow Writer]

This was a beautiful write. Love should be like this. Enjoyed. Phantom..................

[Sheila Kline]

Beautiful! Reading through this dreamy write of love was like floating along on a cotton candy cloud!
It is just so soft and gentle and speaks of such sweet tenderness!
Well done Fran Marie!!
Hugs, Sheila

[Stacey Watts]

A very romantic passionate piece. Very well written. Amazing.

[EmpressPoetess]

Beautiful! So romantic, touched with soft tenderness. A warm, dreamy charmer!