^ IF ^

 

If you want darkness,  I'll put out the sun.
If you want anything,  ask and it's done.
If you need a woman, baby, I'm one.
If you need a helpiing  hand, I got one.
If you want the stars, add the moon and sun.
If you want heaven, consider it done.
If you want hell, frozen ice, Presto! Done!
If you need hugs, Babe I got more than one.
If you want the world, it's yours 'neath the sun.

When the Sun's burnt and Done you're still the One.

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

As the old saying goes....
"Well, ain't it the truth?"..............................such "right-on" words! Just leave it for a woman to do!...smiles...cause it will get done!....well, could be a man or a woman here, but this sure says a lot!
From being the sun, to being done.
And, the pic is awesome!
Nice write Fran Marie!!

[nikita]

That was adorable and touching in equal measures...loved it :)

[Fran Marie]

thanks so much;

[K. Carver]

Nice. Nice. Write.

[ladybug]

I loved it !!!! I can put no more

[Exquisite*]

Thanks for submitting this in my contest. It is a pretty poem. full of promises. I like how you tried to show the magic coming from the hand in the photo. Good job.

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Awesome
Loved it
"When the Sun's burnt and Done you're still the One."

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Fran such marvelous words of true and devoted love... let you love flow like a raging river :-)

[C. Porter]

oh, i like this. it's good.