Dark Shadows

 

Shadows of thought in darkness block my light
               Soul in vague darkness,bad spirits take flight

   So many times,my courage fades away
                       becoming victim ~ demon's evil prey
   and longer than ever,storms always last
                      each heavy raindrop~ a sullen dull splash
Dark depths take control,this torture prevails
                      Intense sadness survives,happiness fails
  days turn to months,where tears laden my eyes
                     once they shined bright as the sun in blue skies
The pale face of death appears in my mind
                    Longer than always is infinite time
 
My soul in vague darkness~ evil takes flight
                    with dark shadows of thought blocking my light

 

Reviews

[MyDearRobby]

I LoVe u WrOtE!iTs So aWeSoMe!:)

[Shelby Baker]

I love how you wrote this poem & how you placed everything together. Very nice!

[AJChallenger]

Great. I've only that to say. This is excellent. You show a wonderful mastery of the medium.

[EmpressPoetess]

Sounds like me when I was suffering from deep depression and PTSD, living in the dark and seething with dark rage. very creative and bold write.

[Autumn Dawn Gorny]

Oooh very creepy-I like it . It conveys so many parts of the human existence, it isn't just a poem about_____.

[Sean M. Addams]

very interesting piece.... i like the darkness you displayed in this piece.... imagery and flow are great in this .... overall nice job...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Ohhh Fran, the evil that men do lives on and on... very dark undertones but boldly displays just how one can be influenced by evil thinking.