Paris Nights

Oh,she was a flirt
Batting her baby blue eyes
 wearing her red skirt

 winking at the guys
a dab of red lipstick with
 a dust of rose rouge

on her cheek,she walked
by in her red high heel shoes
so slick and so sleek.
 
Paris' Nights parfume
she wore, its scent so divine
all the guys pleaded

 be my valentine
 Tho~her heart belonged to one
there was no other

One of a kind guy
her heart's love, her true lover
he took her to dance

for a night of fun
Valentine's gala affair
everyone was there

He proposed to her
as they danced the night away
on Valentine's Day
 

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats for your second win.

[Brianna Brie]

Enjoyable Haiku...got to love them. They are just a snippet of creativity!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your First Place Win. This is a great Haiku String

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning Haiku-Week-16 Contest!

Sal

[Conrad Wrobel]

kawaii!!! Cute ending!
paris night's perfume... what a concept. I've been to Pari, and there is a scent to it that lingers sweetly in memory. I can imagine the woman you describe vividly.
Wonderful story, great imagery, grand descriptions.
Cheers! XD
Conrad Wrobel

[lovelyricalpoetry]

Nice Valentine's Day poem. Lyrical - my favourite, and fun to read. Good job.

[Frances O'Neill]

A nice and flirtatious scene for the scene! Nice string-a-long!

[Mason Vail]

Oooh... the one everyone wants, but has already made her choice... I think every guy on earth can think of at least one girl he wished he'd gotten to sooner!

A great story. Classic.

[Salvatore Buttaci]

You brought me back to Paris with this poem! I spent four days there back in 1974 and loved it!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

A true lovers' poem. Well done!