Bye, Bye Baby

 

 

Hey! I don't love you,what else can I say

Nothing you can do will make me want to stay

Nothing is special about you

I'm sorry I feel that way

 

A news flash darlin',you just don't rock my world!

and I just have to tell you I'm no longer your girl

 

You don't make me feel loved there's nothing left to say

except that it's a fact, I 'm leaving you today

I used to feel something, an inkling that you cared

but the fire died and all that's left

are burnt embers of a love once shared

 

Now I feel nothing, so honey deal me out

I can't go on pretending and stringing you along

sending you false emotions of a love that is not

that would just  be cruel and oh so wrong

 

A news flash darlin' I found somebody new!

who treats me fine as wine and knows just what to do

 

So bye, bye Baby

I'm walking out your door

into the arms of my new lover

because, I simply don't love you anymore!

 

 

Author's Note

Fran 's being a mean B_Tch today~ lol

Reviews

[Blackbirdsong]

Between this and the chocolate fruitcake you're my idea of the perfect woman lol

I think EVERY woman would love to be able to have this poem handy to give to their insignificant other and then just walk away triumphantly. Sometimes you have to be a tough dame in this world and though this isn't the usual side you show us in your writing, it's a side that most of us girls have to keep handy for moments like this. Love this one...off it goes into my favorites, for uh, future reference. :)

[Jacqueline]

You've made up your mind and there's no changing it! This is sort of a deceitful drop: there's a harmony but there is nothing sweet about your delivery. I like this ;)

[Life Calling!!!]

lolz! nice piece, well penned! I wish we all could be able to do that sometime...of course with the caluse that it would be forgotten and we could come back as if nothuing happend! ;-P

[Nix]

Hey, just wanted to say I love this, you have a style I admire. Great pic too! Thanks for entering it into the pic poetry comp. ~ Nix

[Monday Parker]

Oh ouch....I just love this poem... I would never want to be on the recieving end...But its a great poem...Truthful yet very cold...Well done!!!!

[The DuchessPoet]

This is awesome!

Thank you for being so supportive to my contest .... i know that my book club members will get a kick out of this... we love you work... you're a very good poet! Oh I'm sorry poetess! (smiling)

Again TNANK YOU!

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I can't ever imagine my Fran being a B-otch but I guess can men can invoke fury even in the kindest soul. The picture is perfect with the poem, I mean she LOOKS like she is thinking the words. This has a sultry, brash tone that will cut a man in half like a dagger! You go woman :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I got to say Fran you went raw with this one, straight to the point... this was so awesome to read.

[Ravenskald]

LOL good for you Fran !

[J.K. (Not Rowling)]

We're all allowed days like that. I really liked your rhyme scheme to this, slightly less formal, more raw. Sounded (in my head) like a poetry slam. Put a beat behind it and, Senorita, you're a rapper. It's nice to see you work outside of your niche. I was pleasantly surprised by the power of this piece.