demonXangel

 

Golden wings tarnished

 

         black as pitch into darkness

 

                          an angel fallen

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your winning Haiku

[Jimmy Greenie]

This is quite good, actually. Congrats!

[Frances O'Neill]

One misstep, one slip before we know it...Sara's words are aptly fitting here!

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great haiku

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Great Haiku

[Tammy]

Nicely done!

[Violet Rose]

A popular image. I almost missed it in the list of "new writings" because the title is so bunched up. It's a haiku almost (the last line has an extra syllable) with a delicate punch of imagery and elegance. I liked it overall.