Darlin'~you're all i want

 

Santa Baby all I want is.....

I told ole Santa
    time and time again
what i truly want fer Christmas
    but, i think he don't understand
 
He brings me silly things
     like gadgets needin battries' all the time
and flannel jammies, and woolen socks
      a itchin' they drives me out of my mind
 
not to mention that stale ole fruity-tootie- cake
     he keeps putting in ma stockin'
ifen i told him once,
      i told him a dang hundered times
i wants sumthin' really rockin!
 
so i'm given' 'Ole Claus, jes one mor chance
    fer him to get it right
done told him
     Darlin',you're all i want for Christmas
and he better bring you to me come Christmas nite!
 

Author's Note

A fun write for C'mas

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

That gals as fired up as a pot bellied stove with the damper open. That oughta melt the chill off his jingle bells. lol This was fun. Being the real hillbilly that I am, I enjoyed the lingo too much! lol

[A sea person]

Thank you for submitting this to my contest! Sorry it took so long for me to get around to reading it! :)

Very funny! I loved the vernacular you used :)

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[Flame DM]

very amusin, and heart felt XD

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[Wunderlich]

Interesting how this is written in a country-esque dialect, which just makes it all the better.

[Silver_Moon]

God, this is cute. Hehehe!! Thank you again for entering this piece to the contest. :D

[Brenda Sue]

Too Cute!!!!! Wonderfully penned. I love the dialect, it's great.

[Emmy]

I like how you used country dialect.