Darlin'~you're all i want

 

Santa Baby all I want is.....

I told ole Santa
    time and time again
what i truly want fer Christmas
    but, i think he don't understand
 
He brings me silly things
     like gadgets needin battries' all the time
and flannel jammies, and woolen socks
      a itchin' they drives me out of my mind
 
not to mention that stale ole fruity-tootie- cake
     he keeps putting in ma stockin'
ifen i told him once,
      i told him a dang hundered times
i wants sumthin' really rockin!
 
so i'm given' 'Ole Claus, jes one mor chance
    fer him to get it right
done told him
     Darlin',you're all i want for Christmas
and he better bring you to me come Christmas nite!
 

Author's Note

A fun write for C'mas

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

It was a fun write Fran and I hope you got what you wished for. And I am wishing you a happy New Year.

Chris

[barleygirl]

I'm glad I found this in my reading library . . . it helps extend the Christmas spirit to last all thru this week! I love your playful approach to seducing Santa. You use fun playful uninhibited expressions to refer to many recognizable aspects of the holiday (stale ole fruity-tootie cake) . . . all the while hinting at wanting something quite different to pump up the fun of the season! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Margie so much..glad you enjoyed .time to.forget the fruiity fruity stale cake..lets pop the tops on the drinks now..Happy New Year!!

[barleygirl]

My facebook profile pic is a piggie illustration toasting a stem glass full of . . . just so's you know I can relate to your final sentiments! *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

Here's another guy that hopes you get your wish this year... Have a good un Fran.. N:)

[Fran Marie]

Thanks for reading and your words Neville..

[Neville]

my seasonal pleasure.. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful and hopeful words shared dear Fran.
" Darlin',you're all i want for Christmas
and he better bring you to me come Christmas nite!"
A perfect wish above. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Fran Marie]

Thanks John, for reading and your reviews I'm my poetry..
Merry Christmas

[Phill Oz O'fee]

I hope after this humorous seasonal re-write Ole St Nick has delivered as requested - it has been three years! If not - perhaps get 'Amazon' to rewrap and deliver - Merry Christmas ... :-)

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Phil..for reading this 10 year old poem..I probably should re write it but there are just too many that need to be updated and not enough time these days..Merry Christmas

[emmajoy]

A perfect poem to read on a wet and windy day... your words have turned on a light! As for that Santa, he can't always be trusted these days!

'He brings me silly things - like gadgets needin battries' all the time - and flannel jammies, and woolen socks - a itchin' they drives me out of my mind.'

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Emma, for reading my Ky. hillbilly poem..glad it brightened your day..

[alifeacoustic]

Fingers crossed he gets it right this year Fran. I will just be happy if he takes the hint that musical socks have no place in my life :)

[Fran Marie]

Oh no, musical socks..Egads..lol..thanks for reading and the review..

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That was very fun, festive and sweet... love is the best give of all for any occasion.

[Mauricio Montoya]

GOOD ONE!
Merry Christmas

[Patricia]

LOl. Cute. You brought a smile to my face. Love it!