Trace

~Sonnet~

 

 

 

         Softly you whisper sweet love words to me

           spinning my heartbeat to sublime pleasure

         tripping my senses to pure ecstacy

            tenderly you give this divine treasure

 

          Slowly you trace fingertips thru~my hair

             falling, I'm falling,yet again for you

          reeling,feeling, you are taking me there

             fluidly you sense love's fulfillment too

 

          Blissfully we do meld as soul mates one

             rising our spirits to soar the blue skies

          spending each compassion under the sun

             knowingly,a love such as ours ne'er dies

 

          Softly, I surrender my love to thee

              tenderly, pledging all eternity

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Miss Prince]

This is even prettier than the last one ('your touch'). I love sonnets, and I never thought I would read a better one than Shakespeare's Sonnet XXVI (26), but you proved me wrong. I like this one. It shows lust at first, but then melts into love, and I like the transition. It's not trashy, or sleezy. It's sexy, but not in the sex way. Does that make sense? I mean to say that it has an air of sexy and sweet mixed with intensity and romance. I'm just impressed. Again. Good job.

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This is a very beautiful and soft write here.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

This is like a classic love poem from the eighteenth century... eloquent and timeless.