Heads Up

 

Waters cast sad reflections 

                         visions losing you

 life renews with affections

 

                    and I'm not left blue

          

Reviews

[Adrian K. Smith]

This piece provides an interesting view in the transition from coin to person with the realization that even the coin is the person. It is definitely a thinking piece, a lovely snippet of mind candy, to roll around on the mind's tongue. I guess it is because my avatar is blue right now, and I am fighting off that urge to cry - knowing how much gets lost behind the tears... wishing for that tiny display of affection, so that I might not be so blue. Yes, as Sal said... a very lovely poem. Thank you for sharing this with us.

[Helena]

Excellent write!

~ Helena ~

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Very lovely coin poem.

Sal