Drenched in Moonlight

A soothing midnight walk on the beach

 

Walking midnight's beach
 
    drenched in moonlight's glow~feeling
 
                                         serenity's soul

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Sweeeeeeeet!
Love it, simple but beautiful!
Great picture and great wording,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Lady V]

Beautiful Piece. So much said with so few words.


Live, Love and Learn

Lady V

[Brianna Brie]

Fran, this one is so calm and serene. Job well done!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

What a wonderful sense of peace you instill in your words.

i like this one alot!
its very well written for its length
i love the emotion you bring in so few words
wonderful =)

[Justin Tobey]

Beautiful and descriptive. My one critique would be to maybe edit the last sentence structure. It was a bit confusing when you say "glow~feeling," and it disrupted the flow of the piece, at least for me.

[Sean M. Addams]

this flowed like lyrics... very uplifting dreamy piece... overall nice job on this

[Ravenskald]

Small and sweet
But when they're really good like this you have to hate haiku
as they don't develop ideas
or am I missing the point

~Raven

[John Stussy]

Beautifully written haiku, wish it wasn't afternoon now haha.