A Paper Heart

 

I write my heart on paper 'tis thinner than autumn leaves and these tears I cannot taper to put my mind at ease my delicate heart surrendered for a true love I wanted to share showing emotions tendered proving how much I cared I write my spirit to the winds and tho~the ink has dried my soul sealed in sadness descends for this paper heart has died

Reviews

[zaneybear]

great poem, with a lovely flowing rhyme scheme, it's beautiful.

[Lydia Shutter]

Flawless rhyme in this poignant write. So lovely.

[Fran Marie]

thanks dear friend;

[Shalini Dinesh]

such a beautiful poem with a perfect rhyme scheme and fantastic flow of words...

[Fran Marie]

thanks so much for reading;

[smilempsn]

Emotions are so beautifully wrapped in this piece..
I loved the End..!!

:) :)

[Fran Marie]

thanks so much;

[L.G. Knight]

I missed your poems while I was away this one reminded me why. Great job Fran Marie.

[Sarah]

Lovely work. So sweet and sad.

[Becky]

Beautiful.

Yep, that's about it. Your words are fragile yet hide a hidden strength. Great imagery. Well done.

[Magdelena]

Astounding write me gal

Mags xxoo

[Claude]

Beautifully crafted words and meter.

[Alicia™]

The rhyming here feels really natural, unlike a lot of other poems I've read, so kudos on that. One thing: why did you write "and tho~ the ink"?

But other than that, I love it.