Frankly My Dear....

Frankly my dear I dont give a damn

Really, I'm glad you walked out the door

And I'm doing quite well, really I am

No need for you to control my life anymore

 

My burden is so much lighter

A new lover I have found

Reaching a star that shines brighter

I now have a love more profound

Everlasting and eternity bound

Reviews

[Jean]

Wowie! :) I like this. It flows wonderfully and has an appealing attitude. I like the wording.
*Scrounges around to think of a helpful tip*
You could try out a couple different words and see if they fit better. Seeing as you used 'really' twice (which isn't a problem) you could change the second one to 'truly', or something? Also, perhaps change eternity to eternally? Neither is necessary obviously, just something you could look at. It all depends on what you think sounds better. ^^
I love it either way :)

[JohnL]

There must be something very satisfying in giving someone who has let you down the push by using an acronym of your own name. This has done it so well - no wasted words - just "glad you're gone" then a message of optimism for the future to rub it in.

[darkgurl]

Very creative and very well crafted, I like this piece, sad and full of emotion, well written...Kim

[These Haunted Hallways]

Gorgeous! I can relate to this in some ways, and it does feel soo good to let go when someone is hurting your heart, and you want to salvage your heart's broken pieces as much as you can. Beautiful work!

B.A.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A very nicely done acrostic. Thank you for sharing. Debileah