A Mouse in The house!

 

Yipes! A mouse in the house Oh! what a surprise! It ran under the sofa I saw it with my own eyes. Then it darted behind the TV! What was I to do? Sitting at my computer being oh so busy. that mouse started nibbling at my shoe. EEEKKS!! I screamed, you Lil' Rat! jumping up on my chair. I'll have to call in Tom the Cat. Then see what you dare. Well don't Ya kno, He stared me down with his beady eyes as big as you please. Then he went to town started eating all my cheese! Hey! you Lil' squirt, what do you think you're doing? and I jumped off the chair I chased him with a broom, 'Twas only fair. but the critter kept on chewing. Into the bathroom he ran and hopped into the tub. Then to the kitchen garbage can and finally back to the living room rug   Well, I gotta tell Ya. I was pooped! my energies had been spent. I still ain't caught that mouse in the house. I wonder where he went? It's been a week and I've not seen hide nor hair of him. All I know is if I do, I wonder who will win?

Reviews

[Taylor H]

aww this was adoarble

[Puzzle-bot]

Soooooooooooooooooo cute!

[Dalaina Renee]

Very cute! Well done!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Should be a children's book. Think it over.

[Sean M. Addams]

VERY NICE IMAGERY IN THIS PIECE .... LOVE THE HUMOR YOU DISPLAYED HERE... GREAT JOB...

[Adela Muresan]

:)) Kowel.
I really liked this, it's kind of obvious that you liked him despite all the iiicccc-s at chair jumping :).

A.M.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This is great, I could not see the pictures though :o( This was so much fun...run mouse run! lol

[Mr. Misanthrope]

Again, another cute wonder of yours. This reminded me of something between Tom and Jerry and some other story about mice which I would've happened upon as a child when browsing through an Enid Blyton book.

A good read!