Suppose

 

Suppose I wrote my feelings down in poetic verse

would you even read one line

Suppose I practice and rehearsed

spelling it out for you in rhyme

          

if I were to say I love you

would it be so wrong

Suppose I wore my heart on my sleeve

would you think me weak or strong?

 

Suppose the feeling was mutual

saying you cared and felt the same way too

and all along in your heart of hearts

I was the one for you

 

Suppose you scribbled love poems down

would it be that I would care

Suppose you perfected each word and sound

for mine eyes to behold if but I would dare

 

Suppose we two could meet in time

a chance to gaze into eyes that would show

the love supposed in rhyme on line

then we could really know

 

Suppose all the love songs sung

were meant for you and I

then perchance, I suppose,

I would write love poems for thee

my love 'til the day I die

 

 

 

Reviews

[Jerbear The Great]

Excellent poem. Your word choice and organization show such an intelligence to bring the words to life. Your ability to rhyme is uncanny and It shows that you put time and effort into your writing, unless it comes second nature, in which case I would be the first to say that I were envious of you. Great write. Keep up the good work.

[Forest Green]

A complete testimonial written within the shadow of a lonely question mark.

Very nice rhyme. Sincerity shows throughout...each movement seems to have been penned somehow, with fine caligraphy.

Nice work...

[DeeWV]

Fran,

I suppose you could, would write love poems for one who loved you too.
Suppse he is just around the corner? How grand!

Dee

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh so very romantic and loving words of timeless love... beautifully penned my dear.

[Micky]

What a wonderful poem. Micky

[*** Hey Jude***]

This poem radiates tender love, and stepping out in anticipation of new beginnings. Very nice! ~ Jude :-)

[DiamondNRough AKA Patty..]

Beautifully Romantic Poem!

[Tenten]

classic romance, longing pinning happily ever after, the rhyme is nice and the flow it gentle and sweet. its a good piece, and you have me smiling.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This was eloquent and very sweetly romantic. It sounds like a poem Don Juan might read to a lover. I give this the romantic poet award. great job.