Suppose

 

Suppose I wrote my feelings down in poetic verse

would you even read one line

Suppose I practice and rehearsed

spelling it out for you in rhyme

          

if I were to say I love you

would it be so wrong

Suppose I wore my heart on my sleeve

would you think me weak or strong?

 

Suppose the feeling was mutual

saying you cared and felt the same way too

and all along in your heart of hearts

I was the one for you

 

Suppose you scribbled love poems down

would it be that I would care

Suppose you perfected each word and sound

for mine eyes to behold if but I would dare

 

Suppose we two could meet in time

a chance to gaze into eyes that would show

the love supposed in rhyme on line

then we could really know

 

Suppose all the love songs sung

were meant for you and I

then perchance, I suppose,

I would write love poems for thee

my love 'til the day I die

 

 

 

Reviews

[Jerbear The Great]

Excellent poem. Your word choice and organization show such an intelligence to bring the words to life. Your ability to rhyme is uncanny and It shows that you put time and effort into your writing, unless it comes second nature, in which case I would be the first to say that I were envious of you. Great write. Keep up the good work.

[Revolutionary]

Beautiful and solid.

[Just Some Dreamer]

I love this poem sooo much.

[Barbara Walker]

This is not the usual LOVE ANGST poem! Your intent richly resonants in your words, making this a beautiful poem! Kudos! It's going in my favorites!

[sarah]

this is really great!

[Sean M. Addams]

I liked this one alot very heartfelt and loved the ending ... overall a really solid piece from u nice job ")

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

This "supposition" does put you on solid ground......What an ending to this piece of art...timeless congratulations Fran Marie and blessings

[St.Jimmy]

omg! such a wonderful piece! i m speechless!
the poem has really well flow and a perfect rhyme scheme
~Aaradhya

[Just Plain Me]

This is really beautiful...thanks for submitting it into my contest so I got the pleasure of reading it

[Liz Alexander]

You talk to my heart.