Dark Secrets

Haiku/Senryu

 
Smoky mist seeps thru~
 
       chamber's door, clouded visions
 
                                reveal dark secrets
 
            


 

Reviews

[Ravenskald]

short and sweet , I like Haiku, It's interesting what you come up with when placed under a restriction and this is quite nice :)

~ Raven

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Exquisitely written. Beautiful imagery. The image and haiku goes well together.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wonderfully done... yes eventually the things we hide somehow do seep out of the cracks for people to see.

[Prose-full]

Excellence in your Haiku/Senryu..it's beautiful.