Crossroads of Love

Word Acrostic

 

DO you hear me whisper your name?
  YOU should know my love lies untamed
      BELIEVE me when I say it's true
           IN my heart Cupid shot his arrow through

               LOVE so intense,a decision I made
                   AT the crossroads of love~when
                     FIRST we met,'twas then I knew~the
                          SIGHT of you dear, captured my soul

Author's Note

painting <~>Salvador Dal

Reviews

[Lucy Joan]

Creative poem! I love how you crafted it in the pattern to make the phrase "Do you believe in love at first sight". That was well done and you were even able to make the poem itself thoughtful and well written.

[Mauricio Montoya]

i love the format of this piece, the crossroads of love at first sight.
yes i do believe. Excellent write.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow that is fantastic... I love how you made a sentence into a whole poem, I know that couldn't have been easy but you certainly made it look like a breeze. Yes I do believe in love.

[JC]

One of the best examples of this style I have read.
I agree with Danni in that it is a question answered from within.

"You should know my love lies untamed".... my favorite line.

Congrats!

JC

[Mr. Lopez]

This is awesome !! You made me feel the vulnerablilty (spllng?) of your heart and depth of love. Nice work.

Mr.Lopez

[A LaDy NaMeD D]

I like this, is like your asking the person the question *do you believe in love at first sight* and telling them why you do at the same time.

Danni J