The Whole Muckin' Pot

contest write

 

I like to have my mucking coffee
first thing when I get up
Pipping hot and ready for me
in my favorite muckin'cup
 
Now please don't put in sugar
and leave out that mucking cream
Black is what I prefer
smooth, dark and muckin' clean
 
Now I won't drink it mucking  cold
oh.no! it has to be muckin' hot!
and on days when I feel mucking bold
I'll drink the whole Damn Muckin' POT!!
 

 

Reviews

[Norma J. Jessee]

Oh aren't you the clever one. Very clever indeed. I absolutely love this.
I have laughed myself silly and couldn't explain to my husband what I was laughing about for a full 3 minutes. Then he was laughing. Thank you so much for this wonderful read.
If this doesn't win the contest I don't know what will...........

Hugs
Jean

[Marie Harrison]

Oh this is too cute!
I love it!
Great job Fran Marie,
we'll keep that pot
hot for you.

[Jenna]

Ha this is witty and cute I love it.

[The Lone Wolf Prose]

Hahahahah This is quite hilarious! I literally started laughing out loud while reading this. Im quite sure I looked kind of... *shhhs* crazy ~_~ I love this. Nothing more to say. Excellent work :)

[Alaska Frost]

This is great! I got a laugh out of this one!! Very clever!
Love it!!!!
-Alaska Frost

[OutToLunch]

hahahaha! nicely done, nicely done! definitely portrays no serious thought at all. well done!

[L.G. Knight]

I loved it I didn't think it was bad at all lol.... But then again you have a hard time writing a bad poem anyway. Great writing!

[Passion for Literature]

OH-MY-GOSH...a person who loves coffee as much as I do...a woman after my heart...LOL...this is so cute...I'm LOVIN it...,you get a two thumbs up from me on this one...now, I know when you visit how you take your coffee :o)

*HUGS*, Dawn

[LadyLove]

i LOVE IT!! I LOOOVE COFFEE!! Ahem! I can appreciate every word you sid here...geez...I have to have my coffee all day long intothe night or I am not happy! This is a cool read that made me make another cup...grr!!! Ha ha! Blessings!

[CLUTZ]

He He He! I like this. It to me was funny, and I happen to love coffee. Great job!