Half a Heart

Half a heart remains

 

      left with shredded promises

 

                    still crying your name

Reviews

[Rainbowco]

How fitting your words is to the picture. A well done haiga.

[Drow]

Sometimes so few words can say so much. Excellent haiku and use of colour for the word heart. It really drew me in.

[Mr. Lopez]

Wonderful Haiku that says so much in few words. Liked the pic as well.

Mr. Lopez