Moon Lovers

A 10/40 for the Ten Word contest using forty words exactly

 

The sweet scent of Honeysuckle perfume

    permeated the moist night air

       lending a bit of magic 

         and splendid presence of oblivion

 

Purer than glass, a crystal moon glowed

  amid midnight's  sky~as its serene ambience

         calmed two lover's merciful souls

 

Reviews

[Adrian K. Smith]

This is a wondrous piece, in how within such tight confines you manage to capture so much. Each piece of sensory stimulus offered by your imagery adds well to the work, creating that overall effect of perhaps being off in the bushes watching this couple if not being one of the two lovers themselves. It is no secret that I prefer the night, and I am enamored by those pieces that deal with love in the night - this truly is as magical a poem as the subject is itself... :)

[Ellen Kolman]

Beautiful poem, evokes such wonderful and romantic feelings...very inspiring...well done

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, Ellen, so much appriciated..

[Jasmine Thousand]

I love the picture, and the poem is amazing too!
~Jasmine Thousand~

[bluessadmood]

Purer than glass, a crystal moon glowed...
times i looked at a full moon,times it brought fear,but other times,i could see greatness
i could see all that light,all that glow
and i marveled how strong its there
like some great shiny ball in all darkness
like saying ,i can break you
when its not there i miss it a lot
then i know it could never bring fear
no i could only see calm great glow
i loved this writing ,it brought so many thoughts

[Sean M. Addams]

i enjoyed this piece...very dreamy and the imagery was so visual in this...i like the title of this too.. overall very nicely done..

[These Haunted Hallways]

Ooo, very loving and gentle. I really liked this one. I can picture the glow and the warmth in this piece. Very beautiful. Good luck to you in the contest! Great work! :)

B.A.

[Tovli]

lovely poem; sensitive and romantic. tovli

[emmajoy]

Beautiful! It's like written golden honey, it drips sweetness. Good luck

[Angel's Lady]

Well, this just kicks butt! What a great write! Good job!

[Helena]

Beautiful Fran Marie.....you used the words so well for Tovli's contest. Excellent write my friend!

~ Helena