Whirlwind

Rondelet form

    No strength have I

 

                  to escape your  alluring trance

 

    No strength have I

 

 nor do I even care to try

 

          fleeing from this whirlwind romance

 

          Willingly my heart takes love's chance

 

   No strength have I

Reviews

[Lloyd Lofthouse]

Ah, to be brave enough to give it a try. The narrator in the poem may not have any strength to escape an alluring trance but this narrator doesn't seem to care either. After all, nothing ventured, nothing gained but be ready for heartbreak if it arrives. On the other hand, gaining love may be worth the risk. If it doesn't work, I understand that dark chocolate helps.

[Mysty Rayn]

Very passionate and yet almost emotional. Somewhere in between. I just can't put my finger on it. Wonderful!

[The Mad Prophet]

Wow very creative. Both well writen, and awsome art work. Very well done. I like the vortex she stands in front, you can even see the name of the person she is getyting drawn too.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Ah, giving in to sweet temptation, just wonderful passion in this, leaves one weak in the knees.