THe GReeN MooN

Dark Poetry

 

An opague moon grew transparent in light
My memory recalls~ that dreadful night
 
Creatures most fowl,too hideous to view
their icy presence chilled red blood to blue
The thread of evermore folklore foretold
of restless spirits so deadly and bold
and vampire's hunger for taste of blood
as zombies rose from dark graves of deep mud
werewolves howling a dark haunting night threat
your soul quivers to a deathly cold sweat
These unspeakable things roamed about night
Spectors cast dark shadows of fearful fright
 
The moon shone eerie green~ I shant forget
The Memory Remains~Lingering yet
 

Reviews

[A LaDy NaMeD D]

the pictures and the color of the words matched, and it added an extra...umph lol.

"Creatures most fowl,too hideous to view
their icy presence chilled red blood to blue"

loved these lines. I can see already this is going to be a hard contest to judge lol. I loved your use of description.

Danni

[writerholic]

i loved the line
"Creatures most fowl,too hideous to view
their icy presence chilled red blood to blue"
that was really good. simple to the point and it painted a pictuer. i loved your words too.

[Sean M. Addams]

very haunting taste... dripping with great imagery..... a very enjoyable piece... fav lines...and vampire's hunger for taste of blood
as zombies rose from dark graves of deep mud.....very nice!!!
werewolves howling a dark haunting night threat
your soul quivers to a deathly cold sweat

[Gabrielle]

I loved it. It paints a realistic image of poetry and fantasy. You did a fabulous job on this poem. Keep writing.

[darkgurl]

Very well writen and well put together, "and vampire's hunger for taste of blood
as zombies rose from dark graves of deep mud" Like these lines. Well written....Kim