Missed Kisses

Senryu

 

     Remembering you

  

                with your tender lips to mine

                

                                     your kisses I miss

                 

 

                      

 

 

 

 

               

                 

 

                your kisses I miss

Reviews

[Ninelilies]

I'm not too familiar with senryu, but it is delightfully simple.

[Angel's Lady]

How perfectly charming and sweet this is! Very delightful.

[Ray Hamilton]

The longing of the touch and tender kiss of a lost love
Is hard to shake
Nice pen I enjoyed
Thanks Ray { Not a Poet }

[Michael]

Very nice senryu and proves that nice ones do not have to be dark. There is a repeat of the third line at the bottom, did the editor get you? It does me often.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Very nicely done. A cute poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah