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CRaZy in LoVe

CRaZy in LoVe

A Poem by Fran Marie
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love

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Like smoldering embers,my love,
I cannot stop this love I feel for you in my heart.
Tho~ we've drifted apart

Darlin', I'm still crazy in love with you

Remembering your sweet caress
and your tender lips to mine
These things I surely miss.
Wishing they were still mine.

Baby, I'm still crazy in love with you

You made me complete
with your loving arm's strong embrace
no one, nowhere , can ever compete
nor ever take your place.

Hon, I'm still crazy in love with you.

Now I feel the pain of love you see
when I see you with a love that's new.
Wishing it were me.
My broken heart sings blue.

and Babe I'm still crazy in love with you.

So I guess it's over for you
I wish it was over for me
You've played my heartstrings like a worn guitar
See how you are?
A sad lost lover's melody.

You Dog , I'm crazy in love with you.

© 2008 Fran Marie


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Wow! This is really great! The words flow like a stream without any hardles in the route.

"You made me complete
with your loving arm's strong embrace
no one, nowhere , can ever compete
nor ever take your place." this is, I think, the most genuine part, a universal one rather.

Also, "See how you are?
A sad lost lover's melody.

You Dog , I'm crazy in love with you." It is a open calling to a lover starting with honey, babe, and then dog! I like the expression very much.

Thank you.

Raja.


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow! This is really great! The words flow like a stream without any hardles in the route.

"You made me complete
with your loving arm's strong embrace
no one, nowhere , can ever compete
nor ever take your place." this is, I think, the most genuine part, a universal one rather.

Also, "See how you are?
A sad lost lover's melody.

You Dog , I'm crazy in love with you." It is a open calling to a lover starting with honey, babe, and then dog! I like the expression very much.

Thank you.

Raja.


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 8, 2008
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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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