BLACK CLOUD

Acrostic~ Alliteration~ and 3T Form

 

 

 

Big bleek and breaking............Clouds crash carelessly
Long lines of lightening........... Lashing with fierce force 
Adds an agonizing affect......... On and outward across the sky
Causing crude and chaotic.......Undulated winds whip wet and wild 
Knifing-rain rushing ruelessly.....Daunting and damning the dawn of day
 
 

Author's Note

For Constance Triple Challenge

Reviews

[Constance]

AWESOME! You met every part of the challenge, and created something very easy on the eyes, and on the tip of the tongue. I do see a typo in the last D line, damning, you meant, right?
Talk about talent. That's a hard little puzzle to make, isn't it? But oh so fun because it's hard, too.
Great job. I too love your word choice, and the way you used the Acrostic part. Very cool.

[holly]

You do have a way with poetic forms! Nice.

[Valorie J. Shearer]

I love Acrostics, and you have really nailed this one! Very impressive! Take care~~~

[Rainbowco]

I like the style, carrying the lines across through the acrostic, the alliteration for each letter is marvelous.
Original form and style as also. Again, you capture the challenge to a tee.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

I love rain storms, maybe crazy, but I get a peace from them. Your poem made me feel that tranquil feeling. Your flow and choice of words are well put together. Great write.