one with the sea

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        I'm one with the sea
to drown the down in my soul
             sweet serenity

Reviews

[Daz]

So in love with the Piece. You captured the moment perfectly.

[light and ashes]

Beautiful. And amazing.
..........

[Fran Marie]

Thank you ..kindly appreciated

[Pete]

a healing piece. i love the seashore. it is cathartic and speaks volumes. thanks for the trip there fran ... :)

[Fran Marie]

Hi Pete..thanks for reading
and reviewing ..yes the sea is a
serene place ..

[Mauricio Montoya]

Fran such a short piece, I've traveled and many wet and cold was the coast, I'd sit there wondering was next as the Waves would crash but it was peaceful.
Thank you for sharing.

[Fran Marie]

Thank you my friend for commenting
on my short poem ..yes the sea can be
a peaceful place ..sorry I'm so late with my thank you

[Mauricio Montoya]

Hi Fran
I was in Monterey and the seal had come on to the beach by the hundred's, the tourist would come up to take pictures until a male attack, the public was out rage but they still couldn't drive them, yes it's peaceful until they came along but I love your write because the sea belongs to them they just wanted us to see who they are.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Wow it was an excellent experience for me I come close but never attack just something I wanted to share, thank you for sharing

[Kelly Scheppers]

I've always had a strong affinity for the ocean. It is truly a "sweet serenity"...beautiful, Fran!

[Fran Marie]

me too it calms
the soul..thanks Kelly
Zfor stopping by
.i appreciate🌷

[Betty Hermelee]

There is something soft, serene and soothing about the sea; it seems to comfort the soul, lift one's spirits and calm the chaos in one's psyche....so it is not unusual to walk along the sea as if befriending it..... because if the sea caresses you and you to it, then yes one can meld with it as a whole.
Short and very powerful Fran.
Best, B

[Fran Marie]

Thank you kindly
Betty..much appreciated

[Betty Hermelee]

you're very welcome Fran!!
Best, B

[duff]

Everything about the ocean is comforting and daring. The smell and the wonder of what is out there. A walk on the beach is a cure for a scattered mind. Stare into the vast. Great job.

[Fran Marie]

Thank you so much🌷
sorry to be so late in
replying my thanks