This is lovely! I gather that the poem was written around the image, which is so, so pretty. You have included such pretty language: "watercolor whispers," "swirls of silver curls," "waves of a new season," sapphire's breathing autumn's amber breath." These are such beautiful descriptions of a woman in her later years. Perfect!
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2 Years Ago
Thank you Linda for
the lovely review on my poetry
I s o appreciate ..🌷
And absolutely beautiful poem that caresses the heart and the mind of the reader. Like a leisurely stroll through an autumn garden, your poem blooms with the most amazing flowers. I really enjoyed this.
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2 Years Ago
Thank you Will for the lovely
review on my poetry..much appreciated
the art of poetry, the art of painting, the woman who is autumn with her art....drawing
a change of seasons...she brings a scent of love's atmosphere as you do with your words, Fran,
j.
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2 Years Ago
Thanks Jacob🌷for your
kind review ..i s o appreciate
These words would be amazing verbal poetry Fran.
"soft pink and powder blue hues
blend and bend to rosy shades
of sapphire's breathing
autumn's amber breath"
I loved the above lines. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry my dear friend.
Coyote
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Thanks John 🌷 for reading
and the kind review..much appreciated
This is lovely! I gather that the poem was written around the image, which is so, so pretty. You have included such pretty language: "watercolor whispers," "swirls of silver curls," "waves of a new season," sapphire's breathing autumn's amber breath." These are such beautiful descriptions of a woman in her later years. Perfect!
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
Thank you Linda for
the lovely review on my poetry
I s o appreciate ..🌷