My Adonis es

formed with precision 

rippling muscles adorn

a man's streamline physique

his chiseled face

defined features

outline the fine arts

Adonis..i adore you~

   young man of beauty

         

masculinity magnified

with muscular suitability

broad shoulder warrior

spirit of battle

facial hair a sensual image

works its magic spell 

of attraction

     feeling it with ~Ares

             

golden sunlight

a heartbeat from a god

of music..each nuance

a magical note played

in mid tempo verse

of poetry

  enchant my senses~Apollo

endowed with manhood

attributes..naked and divine~ 

      shaped to define

the ultimate form of man

for intent and purpose

    loving ~Adam

           In-a-gadda-da-vida,

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of description dear Fran. When I was young. I roamed Florence three times. I love the ancient cities. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry for the beauty of art.
Coyote

[Sean M. Addams]

Love the detail in this one alot. Going a little sensual 😉. Overall I liked it alot. A very creative piece.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Sean
glad you enjoyed this
one..much appreciated

[Pete]

writing about me again, eh fran? great song you reference with a fascinating tribute of words ... :)

[Fran Marie]

of course I wrote it for you Pete
you and all the men here;there and everywhere haha.yes In-a-gadda-da-vida,
back in the day; Iron Butterflythanks for reading..i appreciate😊

[Crowley]

Lovely Fran. To be immortalized as the perfect man, that’s heady!!!! Great work!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Crowley ..glad for your visit
hope you are doing well

[Robert Haigh]

Physical attraction is a natural thing for all of us, Fran. Sometimes the perfect-looking specimen is not always good for us, but that's another story! lol! I enjoyed the read!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Robert I don't think
us are perfect but yeah I see
what you mean..

[Chris Shaw]

Your Adonis es Fran sound just like my cuppa team , except I am drinking wine. So I will raise my glass to you and your poem. Nicely penned.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

Well; I 'll drink to that 😜
Cheers then to all men folk
Thanks Chris for the lovely review

[Chris Shaw]

Oops, sorry about typos. That's the wine doing that Fran :)

[Fran Marie]

haha I read [team] as a play on the
word [tea] as a cuppa of team given
the subject matter ..a team of the 4
A AAA men in the poem ..its all good 🌹

[Chris Shaw]

Ha...... 🌹