Caught

Caught

A Poem by Fran Marie
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Haiku

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 CRY RAIN SAD LONELY

 

I'm cold and lonely

 

        caught again in love with you

             

                                   crying in the rain


 


© 2008 Fran Marie


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Oh the woes of lost loves and loves of heartbreakers
The haiku was fun to read and the picture added depth to your work
Good luck in the Petite Contest.....
cheers, lea

Posted 16 Years Ago


Beautifully penned. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Damn...I will do everything in my power not to be left out in the rain again! This says it all too well. Superb!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short yet speaks volumes.... very nice great !!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Exceptional piece, Fran...invokes a lot of feeling. Great marriage with the image, too.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So much feeling in one sentence, the words tell the reader what you are feeling what happending to the author as the writing is done.I try to read between the lines and the love you wee feeling is still there but also it has disappeared from you.great write!

sara

Posted 16 Years Ago


I bow to the beauty of your haiku.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely done. You have all the elements of a proper haiku, each line supports the others but stands on their own, In the strictest sense it should be a seasonal reference but rain is often used a replacement for a season so it works.

This is a fine example of what a haiku can express with a structured format. Great Job!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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