Broken Love

Our love has died
  broken grooves
faded and worn out~
painful memories on replay

  feel it~
   those  piercing arrows

fate dealt its bloody wounds
impaling my heart
    a dagger cutting..deep
ripping..out its pound of flesh

a heart so torn and tattered
        cannot mend

how much hurt can one soul bare

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

Writes like this always hit home and very visually love how ended the stanza with,Replay.
Yes we tend to drag it, I guess those are the pains of love,lol. Fran thank you for sharing.

[Cerise]

I think in the first line you missed the L of love...but what a heartfelt write...very well put...

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Cerise
yes I did miss the L
thanks for catching that..
much appreciated

[Patricia Wedel]

Care packages with flowers and fruit to strengthen the body and soul… we were meant to be multi-talented and share our gifts with others who have lost their way.. along the Primrose Path of Romance… a Dance that Rests at last in the Storm Clouds that fade with the Break of a new day. tenderly, Pat

[Fran Marie]

Thank you Pat for your
kind reviews on my poetry
Oh yes ..the primrose path..lovely

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Well Fran that was down right brutal. that is why it reflects how painful a break up can be.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Dale so much for
reading ..true breakups can
be brutal...i appreciate your words