Hologram Dreams

                She was a vague vision
distant 

      

  jagged and distorted
      
      stumbling over her insecurities

         
                   following dark shadows

shaded in hologram dreams
         that held back positive light

          a speed demon

           

             going nowhere.....

Reviews

[Relic]

My first thoughts of this is a woman - maybe from Hollywood - starving for popularity, maybe for fame, maybe even for acceptance, but falling short in each. That dark side has a way of eating people up fast. Thoughts can be corrupted if one's not careful.

My second thoughts - Peg Entwistle. She's the woman who jumped from the hollywood sign and supposedly got the part to a movie the next day.

Yeah, I'm hung up on Hollywood with this one. haha

Good one, Fran. :)

[Fran Marie]

That's just plumb- crazy..pun not
intended ..never heard that one
that's Hollywood for you..always
seeking attention ..i wrote several
shorts /ode type poems about Hollywood
stars..haha so yeah ..thanks Tim ..

[KAREN]

A dark poem, yet very sad. It tells a story in a short amount of words!

[Fran Marie]

Thank you for reading
much appreciated😊

[KAREN]

Your very welcome!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This was unique and interesting. I got the feeling of insecurity and angst blended between the words. Very nicely penned. I enjoyed. F.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Fabian for your kind words
s o glad you enjoyed..😊

[light and ashes]

This is so awesome, so much said here in not very many words at all.

[Fran Marie]

Thank you for reading I so appreciate😊

[light and ashes]

You are so very welcome.

[Betty Hermelee]

a short bittersweet poem; you touch on someone who I feel lives in a dark abyss... that looks to others as if she lives in the shadows, not in the light. Her thoughts dark and jagged and little self image projected; in other words she's taking the wrong path.
Nice work!
Best, B

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Betty..sorry for
the late reply..i so appreciate
your words always😊

[jacob erin-cilberto]

when one feels less worth....darkness is pervasive, all-inclusive...
and we are so held back by our own misgivings.
j.

[Fran Marie]

That is so true we create our
own darkness many times over
dreaming for a better light..
Thanks Jacob so much appreciated

[Anuja Sharma]

I really liked the idea of portraying the hope, a ray of positivity and a beam of sunshine amidst the darkness around us. Like somewhere in our demonic soul, we still have that angelic side prevailing.
Nice one Fran.
Regards,
Anu

[Fran Marie]

Thank you Any..yes angelic versus Demonic light..we hope for the positive
to come forward out of the darkness
I appreciate your kind review

[Anuja Sharma]

You're welcome!!