Song of the Dove

Cool ripples of water..

a cast stone 's reflection

soft as a dove's song

sweet lotus flowers

drift by in shaded

auras of glazed aqua 

as I gaze

'pon a silk smooth pond

 and sketch the vision. 

'

tis what's only mine

                          in my art...

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

Exactly Fran, your vision, your art belongs only to you, as you create it; and it keeps evolving; plein air art is so unique. Take your easel to a wondrous, peaceful place and reflect upon the beauty of it. What you just so beautifully described in this piece will surely be a memento for you. Lovely images!
Best, Betty

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Betty i so appreciate
your insightful review. on my poetry;

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome Fran😊

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Fran... The Art of Water Lillies is so calming...
I have a large Print framed of Monet's painting of pale blue Lillies.
Your poem is lovely. gently, Pat

[Fran Marie]

Thanks dear Pat.
I always appreciate your kind words
and thoughts on my poetry;

[Kathy Mc Cathy]

The soft ripples in the pond is such a satisfying sound of nature , this poem leads to my happy place where I stay calm and true as time passes by and the blue of the water too. Wonderful imagery Fran !

[Fran Marie]

Thank you Kathy so much
appreciate your kind review;

[K writes]

Such a perfect write, and lovely wording

[Fran Marie]

Thank you so very much;

[barleygirl]

Your description reminds me of how my mind feels, living in the wilderness. Just a still pool with ripples of wonderment (((HUGS)))

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Margie ..so much appreciate
your kind thoughts and words;

[no tell writer]

You write really beautiful, I enjoyed this one a lot....

[Fran Marie]

Thank you for reading and the kind review

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful, gentle and amazing use of description dear Fran. You allowed the reader to see the view of the dove. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Fran Marie]

Thanks dear John I so
appreciate your kind words on my poem

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Fran.

[Chris Shaw]

In this short poem Fran, you capture the incredible beauty of the lotus flowers on the lake. I love your description here. An artist with words you are.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

Thank you Chris for
your lovely review..i s o appreciate it

[John the Baptist]

I gazed upon such a pond just yesterday. The day was beautiful, the pond very still and placid, a lone duck cutting a wake slowly through the water. Altogether soothing, a nice place to write a poem.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks..yes it's a lovely place to write a poem....