Moonlight Gardens

           we walked hand and hand

           danced to utopian sounds

                entwined in rapture

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Fran.... I often wake during the night and see the
Moonlight through the trees from our upstairs Windows.
It would be lovely to walk in the Garden with the Moonbeams
lighting a path where hand in hand the magic begins the Beguine...
as sung by many great Artists. Thank you for keeping the flow of
Inspiration alive. truly, Pat

[Fran Marie]

thanks dear Pat.yes when they begin the
beguine..lovely song by many..about as close as you can get to feeling that magic
I al ways appreciate your kind words;

[Kelly Scheppers]

I love the word "utopian" and the way you used it here. So romantic!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Kelly glad you like
it..i appreciate your reviews on my poetry

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

A lovely haiku Fran. It reminds me of images from Woodstock for some reason. I myself was a baby then but I have such a love for the music of the 60s and 70s. Reading your words I could see the mass of people dancing to Janis Joplin as she sang on stage there.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Carlos for reading. .Janis Joplin
what a voice..one of the best..i so
appreciate your reviews;

[albee]

like a rose
blossoming is brief

[Fran Marie]

Thanks s o very much;

[barleygirl]

Miss these kinds of magical moment (((HUGS))) Missed reading you, too!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Margie ever
so much for your
kind reviews;

[Chris Shaw]

I think we all long for magical romantic moments like those Fran. Heavenly I would say in a perfect setting.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Chris. yes I think we do at that..long for those moments;

[Laz K.]

I locked in on "utopian." It's defined as "an imagined place or state of things in which everything is perfect." Life sometimes has those moments whether actual, or imagined.

[Fran Marie]

thanks Laz..yes I suppose life does have
some brief felt utopian moments
..i s o appreciate the review..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Just nice way to escape...even if for just one night.

Forgetting is intoxicating.

Surprised this has no reviews, but then I am not...so many pieces on here go untouched these days. A

few post and respond in turn...but many just post, sad state of poetic affairs.
j.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks for reading Jacob, this site simply
is not as active imo as it once was..of course I've been here 14 years now
writers come and go.it is sad though as
you say..i always appreciate your reviews