Twilight Time

twilight tumbles down in

quiet hues where flowers 

begin to rest, bowing their

heads to a fading sun

I feel a sweet serenity

 a creamy crescent moon

ever so slight

appears in the far distant

sky..i reach to touch it

in my mind absorbing

its milky glow

  

as silhouette shadows

start showing and surrounding

 the hillsides..

 willow tress swaying

to a mellow breeze..

I long to be there

meandering movements

cross the meadows...

brooks trickle downstream

a magic I want to behold.

even in dreams

 

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

This is dreamy even if it is real…… words flowing from twilight to shadows to gentle breezes, to a milky glow, a perfect moment to capture it in a photo or even in a dream…..behold the glory ….
Love it…I would like to paint it!
Best
B.

[Fran Marie]

and I bet your painting would
be lovely..I pencil sketch sometimes
but no painting I use to do ceramic
class years ago and made a couple
pieces and painted them..did you
paint your avatar it's reminds me
of the cubic / block Picasso style
nice..thanks for the lovely rreview

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome Fran; that painting is an abstract portrait of a Thai woman from my photograph. As you can see, I love color.
Best
B.

[Fran Marie]

yes , well done in vivid colors ..nice

[John the Baptist]

Beautiful word picture here. Such images would be lovely to behold, even in dreams. Of course, my dreams are all crazy, so I don't anticipate seeing anything like this anytime soon.

[Fran Marie]

Many thanks..dreams do get crazy
that's for sure..i appreciate the kind review

[Crowley]

I want to behold them as well...Heavy sigh. I'm now ready for a picnic, sometimes I forget to enjoy the things that are there for just that. Loved this!

[Fran Marie]

and now in September is a perfect
time for picnics..thanks Crowly

[jacob erin-cilberto]

reminds me of one of my favorite groups...and what they often sung of....
nicely done, Fran.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-10Le5Y6WmI

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Jacob..i checked it out..love
moody blues ..so many great songs
I appreciate your kind review;

[wordman]

lovely imagery painted on the mind of the readers

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Ron; so very
for your kind words;

[wordman]

my pleasure

[Chris Shaw]

What beautiful dreams. You create a wonderful sense of serenity here Fran. Visually pleasing poetry. You paint with words.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Chris..i so appreciate your
kind review ..glad you liked it....