underwater

Senryu

         lost without your love

my naked heart sinks~slipping 

          into hell's abyss

                     

         a slippery slope

I can't climb~nor can i grasp

         drowning where I stand

Reviews

[albee]

those moments when all is despair...brief i hope...we all need to come up for air...

[Fran Marie]

so true..thanks for
reading albee; and
for reviewing my poems;

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Fran, your double senryu certainly conveys the hopeless feelings of trying to cope when the love of your life is no longer with you. I thought of my sis who lost her husband to covid earlier this year. She tells me that there are days when she feels she is drowning. Your posted image is striking. These lines could represent loss through breakup or death.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Chris ..do many still dying from this Covid virus..yes this one can relate
to death or breakups ..any kind of loss
I appreciate the review;