Barefoot in the rain

It rained, it poured 

and still i wanted more

as I walked barefoot

in rain puddles

 I feel the mist 

 and your warm kiss

 lingers there on my lips

  my heartbeat skips

  to a happy tone

  and I'm not alone

  as a light breeze

 blows by whispering

 the rhythm of our love song  

  tells me I belong

  in your presence

        once again

        

           

Reviews

[light and ashes]

What a beautiful unexpected love poem.

[Fran Marie]

Thank so much..

[light and ashes]

You are welcome.

[Cherrie Palmer]

What a beautiful image Fran. Skin wet from rain and lips warmed by a kiss.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Cherrie..so much
for reading..much appreciated

[Ovi-Odiete]

Your poem has come first place PROFESSOR in the poetry contest LOVE. Once again, thank you for this gift

[Fran Marie]

Thank you..i enjoyed
participating in your contest.

[Ovi-Odiete]

I felt every line, every word, sipping as I read. This is a beautiful love poem and it’s eternal.
Congratulations, your poem BARE FOOT IN THE RAIN has come first place in my poetry contest LOVE. Thank you for this gift

[Fran Marie]

Thank you Ovi..
so much appreciate your
your kind review..

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the feel of raindrops on my skin. It feels like lingering kiss.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks PB..raindrops can be so romantic
and refreshing;

[Poetic Beauty]

I definitely agree with that

[Patricia Wedel]

Soft rain drops are reminders that the Heavens
are aware of our despair... as Bird songs are as
pretty as butterfly wings when children run through
puddles that splash our blues away. tenderly, Pat

[Fran Marie]

Thanks dear Pat I always enjoy
reading your sweet poetic reply on my poems ; I so appreciate

[Coyote Poetry]

So sweet, so wonderful and filled with love and hope dear Fran. I loved every word in the outstanding poetry my dear friend.
Coyote

[Fran Marie]

Thanks John so vey much
appreciate your kind words on my poetry

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello dear Fran and you are welcome.

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

I'm reminded of a perfect moment I had with my first girlfriend as a teenager holding hands walking in the rain. It was so magical that it stays with me even after all these years later. Thank you Fran for your magical poem.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Carlos. for sharing your thoughts
on this one I s o appreciate your kind words