Intimate Moments

 

 

 

Tender is my love for you dear
    hear these words I speak so true
                I'll be your's always

 
Days, each starting anew,

       I'll but love you more
             to explore intimate moments
 

 

Light from a golden sun

        shows my soul glowing
             and a magic  moon  winks
       
 
Stars blink amid a deep indigo sky

               and whisper love's name
                      two lovers become one
 
 
 
Lips meet in the night

             beneath moonlight I concede

                        my heart to you

 
Discreetly?

      No, candidly and completely

                         each intimate moment

Reviews

[Scarlet Pulse]

I think your poem is great. I also think that you are describing intimate moments and with the title, I don’t think you need the words “intimate moments” in the poem itself. You use great imagery to help the reader see and feel what you are trying to get across. Good job.

[Angel's Lady]

Stars blink amid a deep indigo sky - how wonderfully visual. What a lovely poem! Great job.

[Casanova]

very passionate-lovely images