Maybe

my kisses may excite you

my love may ignite you 

yet, my will may fight you

 

your eyes may undress me

your arms may caress me

yet, your will may arrest me

my desires will warm you 

my emotions will harm you

still..my words will warn you

your dreams will enfold me

your heart will scold me

still..your words will behold me

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

Interesting device in this one. In the first three verses the last line seems to contradict the sentiments of the preceding two. It is as though a come on is counterbalanced by a warning. In the last verse, though, the message seems to say the risk is worth it. Perhaps that is the truth about all relationships.

[Fran Marie]

thanks John
I know this
kinda reads
like a riddle
but I can tell
you that your
review is spot
on.
.i s o appreciate;

[Just Kim]

This is so beautiful, love this write

[Fran Marie]

Thanks dear Kim
I do appreciate;

[Patricia Wedel]

Fran... you do write with a Romantic Sword...
touche... gently, Pat

[Fran Marie]

Thanks dear Pat
s o much appreciate
your kind words;

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Kind of has that "I want you to want me, but I am dangerous---I will break your heart even as I love you with all of mine"
j.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks dear Jacob
for your insightful
kind review
s o appreciate;