so long 2020

the last leaf I found

lie quite dead upon the ground

never more around

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Here in California where winter afternoons are often up to 70*, the trees don't lose their leaves until well into Jan or Feb, while at the same time sprouting new buds, soon-to-be leaves. Love how you use the symbol of "last dead leaf" to suggest that hopefully the chuff will soon puff off! Here's to a bright new year enjoying more of your writing! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Fran Marie]

Quite different
In Kentucky our
trees are bare
to the bark
no budding until
spring..yeah
let's hope that
2021 shines
bright with green
leaves glowing
Thanks Margoe
happy New year 😊

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

The year 2020 will be the year of many things. I just hope things can only go up as the years go on.

[Coyote Poetry]

I am glad 2020 is gone. I pray 2021 is better. Here in Michigan. Lose the leaves in October. We know Winter is here. Very nice use of words dear Fran.
Coyote

[Arundass TP]

Though short poem, lines are powerful. Good work

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Arundass
so vey much..
i appreciate;

[Anni Pon]

So long and good riddance! We'll all turn a new leaf over in 2021

[Neville]

........................ Made me shiver in the New Year ..........warmly, I might add .............

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Neville ever
s o much..i appreciate;

[Neville]

........................ more than welcome

[Relic]

Let's hope there are trees that will offer a more safer and prosperous bounty in the new year.

[Fran Marie]

"hope springs eternal"
looking forward to a
green spring season
thanks and
read more"hope springs eternal"
looking forward to a
green spring season
thanks and
Happy New Year Tim;

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and the new leaves of 2021 just waiting to emerge.

[Fran Marie]

yes yes they are
thanks for reading;
Happy New Year Jacob