Lonely Sunsets

 

Love

 

only
 seems to be
   just tears and pain,
        and hours waiting alone
                                in the rain

 

 

Hopes denied,
  Sad sunsets and swallowed pride

 

 

Days are warm, but I'm so cold,
   and all I have are memorires to hold

 

 

As lonely deep red sunsets chaperone
              the sleepless nights I cry alone

Reviews

[Flow]

First this is excellent, expression of the wanting of love or the missing of love. Great write and I love the red ink as well. Still... sometimes those memories keep us from finding new love, sometimes it is next to us or in front but we are busy looking at something else. I have felt this alot in my life, loving, wanting and desiring a person who is too busy loving, wanting and desiring someone else. and I have done the same to be honest. I believe in love and feel we can all have it, or refind it. Excellent write again, I love this one~

[angelinmypocket]

Fran...there are so many ways in which one can feel lonliness. One can feel alone in the midst of a crowd...but being alone with nothing but sad memories and no one to talk to is the most alone anyone can be. Your beautiful, sad write is saturated with lonliness. Very good my friend.
Love/Liz/angelinmypocket

[Wicahpi]

i like this alot; emotional & well expressed
sad, yes...and unfortunately so very true most of the time!

"... (memorires) to hold." ~ memories


"Love


only
seems to be
just tears and pain,
and hours waiting alone
in the rain."

so often, too often; this is so true. heart-wrenching.

[Suelou]

My friend, I can sure relate to this one. I know all about loneliness. This is absolutely beautiful.

[Mr. Lopez]

Fran ,
You make the loneliness of heartbreak sound so romantic. I know that that sounds wierd but you've managed to make the pain feel beautiful. This is a true deminstration of skill from a writer with pain to share. Loved it !

[Rainbowco]

Again your words mesmerize me, flowing, lovely, piece.

[Ray Hamilton]

" Days are warm, but I'm so cold, and all I have are memorires to hold. "
I can relate to this, some are hard to let go of But you must move on.
Don't worry I'm sure you will find the right one to warm you up LOL
I feel your pain Thanks for sharing Ray { Not a Poet }