Color me

 

 

Color me a rainbow
  sprinkled with golden dreams
             with dashes of wishes
                       in  purples, blues and green

Color a me a heaven
  with cotton-candy-clouds
            amid a sky of azure blue
                   Color me sweet red roses
                         kissed by  fresh morning dew

Color me some raindrops
   Splashes of misty-crystal hue
           with wet blades of silky green grass
                                     to run barefoot thru~

Color me lofty trees
     dressed in autumn's shades of gold
                 Clusters of scarlet and brown ones
                         on the ground, as the seasons unfold

Color me a white-winter-wonderland
      with whistling wind and whirling snowflakes
             flying around in the crisp- cool air
               Then color me right into a verdant green spring
                                    where robins sing without a care

Color me back to summer
     Beneath a yellow-lemon '(sun')'
           Then color me a silver moon 
                 and black starlight night
                                when the day is done 
 

Reviews

[Tovli]

awesome imagery! i enjoyed this poem very much. the graphics too! tovli

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The imagery used throughout this poem is simply enchanting! A delight to read. I enjoy how you wrap it up in the beginning. This could also be a children's poem. I will be reading this to my youngest daughter :)

The picture is breathtaking! An exquisite write, my friend!

[angelina neves]

wonderful colorful rainbow poem! Lovely!

[poetaster]

hey, i like this piece. especially with the picture, it reminds me of innocence and children's wonder at the world.

suggestions:
"thru" to "through"
"Brown" to brown
"starlilight" to "starlight"
"verdent" to "verdant"

i like how the rhyming isn't overdone. the imagery is written well, really brings the colors to life, not only with sight, but also touch and even sound. the spacing is refreshing, too. i really love color as well as nature, and this poem is a great write.

[WoFer]

nice flow, good vocabulary. But why? where are you taking the reader? what are you trying to teach them??