Color me

Color me

A Poem by Fran Marie

 

 

Color me a rainbow
  sprinkled with golden dreams
             with dashes of wishes
                       in  purples, blues and green

Color a me a heaven
  with cotton-candy-clouds
            amid a sky of azure blue
                   Color me sweet red roses
                         kissed by  fresh morning dew

Color me some raindrops
   Splashes of misty-crystal hue
           with wet blades of silky green grass
                                     to run barefoot thru~

Color me lofty trees
     dressed in autumn's shades of gold
                 Clusters of scarlet and brown ones
                         on the ground, as the seasons unfold

Color me a white-winter-wonderland
      with whistling wind and whirling snowflakes
             flying around in the crisp- cool air
               Then color me right into a verdant green spring
                                    where robins sing without a care

Color me back to summer
     Beneath a yellow-lemon '(sun')'
           Then color me a silver moon 
                 and black starlight night
                                when the day is done 
 



© 2010 Fran Marie


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Cor
I love this!! So much!

It flowed so well, I loved the structure and the colors.
Pictures beautifully painted into my mind. I forgot I was even reading and just got lost in imagination.

Posted 10 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

10 Years Ago

Thanks Cor.,so very much ,
Love this the way you have used your typing and made the letters stand up is brilliant outstanding and smart.the colored letters were even better yet. I like very thing to do with this creation of this poem you Imagination is running full tilt on this challenge. Best of luck may you win God Bless.

Posted 10 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

10 Years Ago

Thanks Smitty, much appreciated;
Beautifully colorful poem!! Congratulations on winning the "Colorful poetry" contest. I especially like the "Color me some raindrops" verse, but I love them all. You had all these images appearing in my head as I read it. Very nice job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a nice poem it's cute. I think it was great for a rainbow contest. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Definitely brought a smile to my face. Love the feel of this piece and the overall message. Once again...CONGRATULATIONS! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Congratulations Fran on Winning first place...this was awesome!

Bea

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice... I am reminded of childhood innocence and twight hours before Mother's call to come home.. great imagery!! Thanks for sharing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a lovely write! Beautiful in content, imagery, formatting and flow. Thank you for sharing

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent poem. Very vivid descriptions, and I like the idea you had. I have a real affinity for color, so this piece appealed to me.

You should consider entering it in a contest I'm doing, called Colors. Thanks for sharing! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Paris, KY



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