Honeysuckle

Haiku~

Honeysuckle scents
the mystical moist night air
as we share sweet love

Moonbeams from above
cast a magical spell, meant
for lovers to share

Star's silvery stare
shine brightly the glow of love
with heaven's consent

Dawn rises content
a mystique still lingers there
'tis but you my love

Sun shines without care
a new day of blissful love
a sweet splendor sent

Moist nights re commence
scents of honeysuckle love
heart and soul we bare

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the String-Along #2 Contest?

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

A beautiful Haiku for lovers. Well done Fran, a great Haiku String

[Mark D. Chevalier]

I'm really new to poetry, and to tell the truth a little intimidated by all the different forms. But I thought this was really fantastic. It was gentle, filled with tenderness and love. Just excellent!
Mark

[Deborah Shepard]

Truly lovely the haiku my fav

[PENS FOR PEACE /TJ CALI..]

Love it! Beautiful and artisticly done! Good luck in all your future works!
TIM

[Liam]

I absolutely love Haikus and this is awesome! Well done!

[Ray Hamilton]

Made me relax reading this, I think I can smell the honeysuckle
You painted a delightful picture for the reader
I enjoyed your write as always Ray { Not a Poet }

[Mr. Lopez]

Liked the haiku format. Good job on what i find very challenging.

[Tara Jean Olson]

wonderful!!

[Carole]

This is so light hearted and free, Fran. I love the scent of Honeysuckle...(just wish it didn't attract bees.) An amazing haiku extravaganza! Well done!