The Magic of You

 

Kissed by smooth raindrops

         hugged by the whispering winds

                                loved by your warm touch

 

caressed by bright stars

         charmed by the magic of you

                             I'm sent to heaven

 

 

Reviews

[Astrid Hamilton]

This, my sweet,
is so very pretty.

The brevity is perfect for the emotions,
the photo emulates the long stares of two long lost lovers who have finally found eachother, not even reunited; finally truly found themselves within each other, in that stare.

I don't know what else to say,
except that I think it is perfect,
in every way.

[Wildfleour]

A lovely little poem that manages to capture very tender emotions.

[Ray Hamilton]

Short but sweet
I enjoyed this
Thanks Ray { Not a Poet }

[Gabrielle E. M. T.]

This is a very pretty poem.
Simply Beautiful.
Breath taking!
The rythme was amazing.
Such a lovely flow of wrods.
Wonderfully Written!
Great Job!
^_^

[forfila]

awww Fran, this is just beautiful, I love it.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

The poem pretty much says it all, beautiful.

[Sarah]

This was so short & simple, and yet - absolutely breathtaking to read! Your choice of words was amazing, particularly in a piece such as this where every word counts! I loved the description - really gorgeous!!!