Oh Sad Poet

~Kyrielle Form~

The moon in your sky sleeps distressed,
Bringing sadness, gloom and deep stress.
Write such of happy thoughts again
Oh sad lost soul take back your pen


With heart stained ink,so darn depressed.
You wrote volumes of loneliness.
Bitter you've grown now make amend
Oh sad lost soul take back your pen



'Tis true, I've read your lonely tears
Written doubt,filled with hopeless fears.
Put sepia spheres to an end
Oh sad lost soul take back your pen



Perchance new love may come your way,
casting blue hues to sunlit days
Erase taupe tones, too long have been.
Oh sad lost soul, take back your pen.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

I'm not lost but this speaks Volumes
of my sad depressed poems I've been
going through
heartache and a broken heart
in my life but yet I still write as I'd go completely mad and insane if I never
wrote again.

This was happy sad melancholic
Beautiful poetic beauty.

God bless!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Banita for your kind comments..i do so appreciate it..

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome :)

[RûbbërS&osla..]

Wow.. this is amazing. I love your writing style so much. I'm in awe!
This is the first time I've given 100/100 rating!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so vey much..glad you enjoye... and I appreciate the rating also😀

[Laura S-C]

I think it is an incredible poem. Depressing but kind of motivational.

[Tovli]

totally impressed. this is your medium! well done. tovli

[J. James Reider]

I see you prefer you Kyrielles to be 4 quatrains (: I myself believe that 3 quatrains sometimes isn't enough... great job and thanks for entering!

[WritefromtheHeart]

Lost love often gives us much fodder for tragic, melancholy poetry...but I love the way you keep enticing the sad poet to take pen again and write of happier things ;-)

[mysticgmekeepr]

I love your line:
"oh sad lost soul take back your pen"