We're better together

 do we need approval

 from anyone of our love?  

 it can't be far off the mark

 we're just two lovers 

In love's sweet embrace 

as one spirit In the dark 

the world doesn't exist

I care not what they think 

we can't be weighed down

when we fill each other's bliss

and from cupid's cup we drink

when you know it's

just we two

free to follow a future bright

our soul mate bond so true

sublime entry into the light? 

and if we choose forever

intense lovers are you and me

eternity sings were better together

'tis a love which was meant to be

Reviews

[Vari]

Sun in other's day, the wind in other's sky, the waves in other's ocean and the beat in other's heart... Thinking of each other! Pair of lovers is a pair of eyes that never tired of looking at each other, lyrics to each other, closing each other, in the light and dark and two books, writing and reading each other, without ever interchanging the pages. Gives me lots of emotions flooding in thoughts. Enjoyable and lovely poem :) made me think of someone simply a masterpiece Marie :)

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Vari
for the grand
review on my
poetry ..yes
two lovers
like writing
and reading
each other
right on;

[Poetic Beauty]

What matters is if the two consenting adults are happy. No one else is in the relationship with them so it should not matter what others think nir should people try to put their nose in where it doesn’t belong

[Lauren..]

Very good imagery can’t wait some more of your writing

[Fran Marie]

thanks Lauren;
s o much appreciated;

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Fran... the Stars fall when lovers embrace... Flowers dance and birds romance with songs of sunny bursts of vibrations... May it always be so.
tenderly, Pat

[Fran Marie]

yes; may it always
be so..thanks
dear Pat; I
always appreciate
your kind word's;

[Crowley]

No approval is ever needed, and even more so almost never heeded!!!! Lol...we manage singular focus when it comes to love, when nothing else in our life can garner that much attention. Great writing and great questions!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Crowley
s o very true
I appreciate
your kind review;

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Lovely to bask in love's glow, knowing it will outlast these transient bodies.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Val
s o much
appreciated;

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Blessings to you Fran.

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Love is such a beautiful bond of choice between two people. Its a pact and a contract written in hearts. Binds yet frees. Abiding always.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Chat a
so much appreciate
the kind review;

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

My pleasure dear Fran!

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe Donne wrote. "Love find us, we do not find love." Hello dear Fran and I loved the complete poem.
"and if we choose forever
intense lovers are you and me
eternity sings were better together
'tis a love which was meant to be"
I agree with the above lines. When love find us. No sweeter place to taste. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry for love.
Coyote

[Fran Marie]

Thanks John
love does find
us ..so true
I appreciate
your kind words read moreThanks John
love does find
us ..so true
I appreciate
your kind words
and thoughts on
this one;

[Coyote Poetry]

I love your work and you are welcome dear Fran.

[Marina]

You had me thinking of Romeo and Juliet here, Fran....that kind of fiery, passionate love that matters more than anything else in the world.....and those that don't agree with it, be damned. When you find the right person to share love with this is the way it feels. Just two against the world. It's a wonderful place to be in emotionally and your poem, written in it's lovely, rhythmic, flowing style does justice to such love. A beautiful poem. 💛

[Fran Marie]

thanks Marina
so much for
your kind review
on m y poetry
I so appreciate;

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Beautifully written, I smiled all the way through and bugger at the end. I agree with Ankita. I also really like the rhyming as well as the golden meaning behind the words. Wonderfully explained and expressed, Fran. tyfs

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Cyprian
s o very much
appreciated;