it's all you left me

black orchids and rain

 cold flower drenched in love's pain

I'd do it again

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Your well-chosen images remind me of some savagely good times that burnt out fast. The power of your message resonates further as we imagine being so defiant toward pain that we'd do it again (whereas many retreat to their caution places to avoid further heartbreak). A few short lines that DELIVER! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Fran Marie]

thanks Margie
exactly I hear
what you're saying
those burnt out days
kinda like john
melloncamp' s
" Hurt so good"
yeah we'd do it
again..appreciate
the kind review;

[barleygirl]

Love your John M. reference! Perfect!

[Neville]

must have been damned good .......... enough said ..
... exceptionally well writ Fran and muchly enjoyed ..

Neville

[Fran Marie]

thanks Neville
lol; yea h he was

[Neville]

I just knew it... that’s a fellas intuition for ya see 👍😎🍷

[Fran Marie]

right you are Nev (*-*)

[Neville]

~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 👍 🍷 cheers m'dear :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this one just slammed into me and knocked me flat, Fran...
Wow.
fantastic use of three short lines for ultimate effect.

j.

[Fran Marie]

thanks dear Jacob
the KO punch huh?
delivered n 3 lines
s o glad you liked read morethanks dear Jacob
the KO punch huh?
delivered n 3 lines
s o glad you liked
m y poem..

I appreciate your
kind review;