Earth Queen

Earth Queen
Thor's thunder-heads crashed
with a mighty roar
Swiftly sending , Rain decending
to an anticipating Earth's floor

Raindrops fell upon Mother Earth
Turning everything bright and green
Washing anew,promoting lush birth
Mother Nature's refreshing refrain to sing

Trees now donned,their new green gown
Flirting flowers in fields swayed to and fro
And entering in,A Spirit of Renewal~ born,
As Mother Earth displayed her show

Birds and bees and butterflies
fluttered freely among a balmy breeze
As a glowing gold orb arose,lighting up the skies
Yes, a Spirit of Renewal had been released

Now the Earth Queen wears her new smile
in a vibrant, verdant spring style
Sitting plump with growth upon her throne green
while babbling brooks flow on for miles
A perfect picturesque springtime scene

Reviews

[Vanessa]

I have to say, as well, that I nearly felt there, standing in a damp meadow, watching as the rain fell, rolling off of the trees. And I thank you foradding this to the group. It's nice to know that someone received my request as buoyant.
So, once more, this was great. And I have to say that I felt some sort of feeling.... mood, if you will, in this peice. It was surging with some sort of spirit-like vibe. I dunno, maybe that's just the feel I got from it. Either way, I really quilte enjoyed it.
Well done, and thanks for adding. Hope to hear more through the group.

Originator,
-Vanessa Alyse

[Nath]

Great poem, I like how you personify the change of seasons from winter to spring as a "Spirit of Renewal", restoring the lost greenery and thus the old splendor of the "Earth Queen".
Overall beautiful.

[J.K.P.]

Thank you for submitting this beautiful piece in my contest. :]

[Sonife]

fantastic.

[Lady leah]

excellent write.

[Susan M]

Your writing is very evocative. I could actually see what you wrote, like it was happening before me. It also seems as if someone has a pagan heart ...

[Prose-full]

you are such a great poet...
your flow is amazing..

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This is beautiful! I loved the words. They said so much about spring, bringing life to earth. Great poem!

[Dezaraye]

This piece is so beautifully descriptive. Your usage of imagery is really breathtaking.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Sounds like Spring to me! Excellent Write, Fran. Beautifully written.